The chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliences and amount of time spwnt doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The provided line graph depicts the changes in ownership of electrical devices and the amount of time spent and housework in households in one province from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
,it is clear that
the proportion of households with electrical appliances dramatically increased,hence
,amount of hours per week decreased between 1920 and 2019.
From 1920 to 2019, the refrigerator as well as
volume cleaners rose considerably,their percentage increased significantly and reached 60 % by 1940.Then
there was a steady increase,after which their amount stabilized and remained at that level till 2019.Their proportion also
increases over the given period.The percentage of washing machines increased markedly and reached 70 % by 1960.There were fluctuations in 1980 apply, however
,apply the trend was upward.
Turning to apply the second chart,in 1920 the percentage number of hours per week was found 50%.In 2019,apply there was a dramatically decreased of 20 % apply,after which the number of hours per week stabilized.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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