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 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the ways of electricity generation by four
fuel
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 types in five countries in Asia in 2005.
Overall
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, Malaysia mainly relied on one particular
fuel
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 source, which was coal
while
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 Singapore, Japan and South Korea had a wider variety of
fuel
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 types. Yet, using petroleum products was the least popular way of generating electric power in all countries, excluding Thailand. Moving on to the remainings, they relied on a larger range of
fuel
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 types for electricity production.
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, nuclear power and other fuels contributed
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 of the total in Japan
whereas
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 the sum of nuclear, hydro and wind energy were approximately 81% of the sum in South Korea.
Subsequently
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, Singapore fairly depended on coal and other sources to produce electricity, which
were
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 42% and 39% respectively. Moving on to
other
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the other
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 two countries, it is apparent that the main
fuel
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 type used in Malaysia was coal,
whcih
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which
 contributed third-fifth of the total production chain.
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, around half of the electric energy in Thailand was made by unknown sources, followed by petroleum products.
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