The diagram below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the development of the coastal
village
of Seaville in the period between 1980 and 2010. It can be clearly seen that there were
such
huge changes in the
village
. In general, the expansion can be seen mostly in the construction of new amenities and infrastructure on the eastern
side
. On the eastern
side
, there were significant changes
such
as the road dividing the
village
into 2 areas being extended in various ways to connect with several new amenities along the river.
In addition
to
this
was the construction of a retirement
village
as well as
a boat club by the river, near the boat club was the hotel which was transformed from the sand dunes and the restaurant next to it was converted from the tea room. On the western
side
, the woodland at the top was chopped down to make way for a golf course.
Besides
that, the area which was a marsh was replaced by permanent houses,
also
the holiday cottages which were originally located on the western
side
of the
village
were
also
relocated to the southeastern
side
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • coastal village
  • underwent significant changes
  • small settlement
  • developed and structured area
  • limited number of houses
  • coastline
  • constructed inland
  • population growth
  • very few amenities
  • shift towards a more self-sufficient community
  • transport infrastructure
  • narrow roads
  • wider roads and pathways
  • connectivity
  • coastline
  • pier or jetty
  • seaside activities
  • tourism
  • natural areas
  • preserve natural landscapes
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