Nowadays,
teenage
think it Correct your spelling
teenagers
hard
to talk and understand elderly Add a missing verb
is hard
people
. There are some factors that Use synonyms
younger
generation has changed their behaviours Correct article usage
the younger
due to
technologies and how they glow up. For Linking Words
instant
, Replace the word
instance
Children
who are raised by busy Use synonyms
parents
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be
likely to leave their kids with Wrong verb form
are
tablet
to watch cartoons or play games. Fix the agreement mistake
tablets
Therefore
they have less Linking Words
communication
with other person as they believe most of their Use synonyms
friends
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who
they can talk to can be found via the Change the pronoun
whom
internet
. in Capitalize word
Internet
this
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essay
we will talk about causes and solutions in the following paragraphs. Add a comma
essay,
Firstly
, many Linking Words
children
spend less Use synonyms
time
with their Use synonyms
friends
at school Use synonyms
if
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apply
compare
to the past Wrong verb form
compared
that
after class they spent Correct word choice
when
time
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play
sports or some activities with other Wrong verb form
playing
friends
which Use synonyms
are
helped their wellness and Unnecessary verb
apply
communication
Use synonyms
skill
. when they are home, Fix the agreement mistake
skills
parents
may not reach home Use synonyms
due to
work so only one friend that they have is a tablet or phone Linking Words
then
they Linking Words
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are addict
addict
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addicted
affect
to elderly Correct subject-verb agreement
affects
communication
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,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
makes their Linking Words
communication
skill regardless Use synonyms
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of ages
ages
much harder. The Correct subject-verb agreement
age
simply
solution for Change the word
simple
this
is to make them less Linking Words
rely
on Replace the word
reliant
the
online platforms Correct article usage
apply
for example
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parents
control their screen Use synonyms
time
and encourage them to spend more Use synonyms
time
with their physical Use synonyms
friends
Use synonyms
who
they can see in person not Change the pronoun
whom
the
online Correct article usage
apply
friend
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friends
ones
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Finally
, as many families are compact which is only Linking Words
parents
and their Use synonyms
children
live together Use synonyms
in
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under
a
same roof unlike decades ago Correct article usage
the
that
a large family contained many generations like there were Correct word choice
when
grandmother
, Fix the agreement mistake
grandmothers
parents
and Use synonyms
children
lived together so there were many chances to pass culture from one generation to the next and they tended to understand and communicate well between grandson and grandfather. To solve Use synonyms
this
problem, there is a way for Linking Words
parents
to arrange more activities and more often within family Use synonyms
member
including grandparents and grandchildren to bond together. Fix the agreement mistake
members
Moreover
, the younger Linking Words
people
will communicate better with other elderly Use synonyms
people
as they understand how grandparents may believe even Use synonyms
through
older Correct your spelling
though
people
are not their relatives. To Summarise, the causes and effects that younger Use synonyms
people
have less Use synonyms
communicate
with older Replace the word
communication
people
because Use synonyms
of
they don't understand Change preposition
apply
elderly
opinions or attitudes and they tend to have more fun with Correct article usage
the elderly
friends
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as
the same age or more Change preposition
of
entertain
with online Wrong verb form
entertained
friends
and games. I strongly believe that if Use synonyms
children
and Use synonyms
adolescence
spend much more Replace the word
adolescents
time
with their own grandparents Use synonyms
then
they will develop their bond and even better communicate with other elderly.Linking Words
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