In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions?

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conversation

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. So, the looking way to be

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communication that not looking for the same way. The older people have another idea and the younger

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have another idea.

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, the problem of

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opinion

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forward. So, the solution

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will be recognized and

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task achievement

Try to elaborate on your ideas and provide specific examples for your explanations.

coherence and cohesion

Work on structuring your paragraphs more clearly with distinct introduction, body, and conclusion sections.

coherence and cohesion

Consider using clearer language to express your ideas, as some phrases were difficult to understand.

task achievement

You addressed the topic by discussing the generational differences in communication.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

83 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

technological proficiency
communication gap
digital tools
worldviews
common ground
contemporary slang
informal language
misunderstandings
social hierarchy
cultural norms
stereotypes
prejudices
open communication
out of touch
inexperienced
effective communication
intergenerational programs
cross-generational activities
mutual respect
active listening

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In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The rise of social media platforms has made it easier for people to vent their frustrations and complaints publicly. What is the consequence of this trend? Is there any benefit to expressing complaints on social media?

New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Now-a-days modern modes of transport are available, still some people believe a bicycle is the best way to get from one place to another. Do you agree or disagree?

The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?