The Diagram below describes how water is stored and used to produce electricity. Write an academic report indicating the main features and how they are interrelated

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The Diagram below describes how water is stored and used to produce electricity. Write an academic report indicating the main features and how they are interrelated

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The diagram shows the process of hydroelectricity production from

water

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stored in a

reservoir

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in Homeland. The process for the production of hydroelectric

power

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consists of a dam with a valve and a turbine and a pump chamber on its downstream side and high voltage cables for the transferring of high voltage to a transformer station.

Initially

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, the valve opens and

water

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flows from the dam into the turbine through a canal and generates

power

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, after which the

power

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is transferred by two high voltage cables to a transformer station. The

power

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then

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distributed to factories, homes and hospitals in Someland via underground cables.

Water

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flows back from the turbine through a canal and is pumped back into the

reservoir

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. The

water

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in the

reservoir

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also

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replenished by rain which is caused by the evaporation of

water

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in the oceans and seas which

then

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produce clouds that pass over the mountains where they cool down and cause rainfall in the vicinity of the

reservoir

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maryam.veiszadehMon May 29 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, reservoir, power with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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The Diagram below describes how water is stored and used to produce electricity. Write an academic report indicating the main features and how they are interrelated

Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women.

MANY PEOPLE SAY THAT GLOBALISATION AND THE GROWING NUMBER OF MULTINATIONAL COMPANIES HAVE A NEGATIVE EFFECT ON THE ENVIRONMENT. WHICH VIEWPOINT DO YOU AGREE WITH? USE SPECIFIC REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR ANSWER. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while some think it is best to deal with them nationally Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while other argue that the aid money is misspent by governments that recieve it, so the international aid should not be given to the poor countries in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?