The line graph illustrates the percentage of audiences in UK who listen to radio and watch TV during the day from October to December 1992

The line graph illustrates the percentage of audiences in UK who listen to radio and watch TV during the day from October to December 1992
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The line graph illustrates the
percentage
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of audiences in the UK who listen to the
radio
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and watch TV during the
day
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from October to December 1992
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, the
radio
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audiences increased noticeably during the morning period,
while
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the television audiences exceeded the
percentage
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of
radio
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listeners throughout the rest of the
day
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. With regards to the
percentage
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of
radio
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listeners, it started at less than 10% at 6 am. A noticeable rise is observed in the following 2 hours peaking at approximately 28%.
Nevertheless
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, the number of
radio
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listeners began to decline rapidly to less than 20% at noon after which the
percentage
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did not increase rather it went down gradually till the rest of the
day
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and reached 2% at the beginning of the next
day
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.
On the other hand
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, the
percentage
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of television viewers remained slightly steady from the first two hours of the
day
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, after which it showed a dramatic rise reaching about 47% at 7pm.
However
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, it went down quickly by approximately 33% at midnight. The decline continued until the beginning of the next
day
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.
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