The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate an industrial area in the town of Norbiton nowadays and the development plan for the future.
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, the planned future development aims to turn the industrial area in Norition into a residential. Now, the region is industrial. It contains eight factories in the middle, centred by a square. The river is on the north with no direct access to the farmland behind.
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the town is on the west. The planned future development tends to turn the zone into a residential zone. It will have seven housings, six nearly in the area itself and one can be reached through a bridge that crosses the river.
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, a School, a playground and a medical centre will be built and
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shops.The school will be built in the east,
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the medical centre and the shops are in the south.
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, the housing will have good access to all the facilities in the zone.
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, a new roundabout
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the south road will be created.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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