The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years.
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of power from several sources from 1995 to 2005, measured in percentages.
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, it is noticeable that the output was dominant from gas, coal, and
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petrol
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other categories showed the opposite.
According to
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the data, the
production
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of energy was high from gas, coal, and petrol in both years. Stood at just below 30% in 1995, the amount of gas increased to more than 30% in 2005, slightly lower than coal
production
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in that year.
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, followed by petroleum, which accounted for just above 29%, before decreasing to around 19% in 2005. For coal output, the number of
production
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had increased from 29.80% to nearly 31% in 2005. Turning to other categories, nuclear and other non-specified
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showed the least output contribution. Nuclear was merely at 6.40% and increased to more than one in ten in 2005,
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for other energy only about 5%
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rose to 9.10% in 2005, more than two times higher in 2005.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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