The graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the changing
number
of
pupils
in the world for three different languages from 2020 to 2030, measured in millions of
students
.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the English subject will gain more
pupils
in the future,
while
the other two language subjects will be less significant.
According to
the line charts, most
students
will opt to study the English language in the long run. Starting at around 550
million
, the
number
of participants will increase to 700
million
, before slightly decreasing to just above 600
million
and reaching about 750
million
at the end
of the year, which is the highest among the other languages subjects. Turning to the other language subjects, Mandarin and Spanish courses show the least significant
number
of participants in the future. Starting at above 200
million
in 2020, which was two times higher than that of Mandarin
students
, the total of
pupils
will grow to 300
million
before marginally increasing to just under 500
million
in 2023.
However
, Mandarin starts at a lower
number
of
students
but rises steadily and will reach just below 600
million
students
, slightly higher than Spanish
pupils
in 2030.
Submitted by khairanaizzati on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, pupils, students, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: