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The graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows predictions about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the changing
number
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 of
pupils
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 in the world for three different languages from 2020 to 2030, measured in millions of
students
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.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the English subject will gain more
pupils
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 in the future,
while
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 the other two language subjects will be less significant.
According to
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 the line charts, most
students
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 will opt to study the English language in the long run. Starting at around 550
million
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, the
number
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 of participants will increase to 700
million
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, before slightly decreasing to just above 600
million
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 and reaching about 750
million
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at the end
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 of the year, which is the highest among the other languages subjects. Turning to the other language subjects, Mandarin and Spanish courses show the least significant
number
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 of participants in the future. Starting at above 200
million
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 in 2020, which was two times higher than that of Mandarin
students
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, the total of
pupils
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 will grow to 300
million
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 before marginally increasing to just under 500
million
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 in 2023.
However
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, Mandarin starts at a lower
number
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 of
students
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 but rises steadily and will reach just below 600
million
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students
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, slightly higher than Spanish
pupils
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 in 2030.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, pupils, students, million with synonyms.
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