Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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As the world develops, humans are having more choices in terms of food, which means people would be more aware of their food consumption in order to be healthy.

As a result

, many suggest that a diet without meat or fish is beneficial to our wellness

as well as

the world. In my perspective, there are many aspects that should be considered about

this

opinion. In terms of health benefits, it is obvious that meat and fish contain a higher amount of fat, especially cholesterol, than vegetables and beans, which could be harmful to

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the human’s

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human’s

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body.

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; Cholesterol is proven to cause heart disease and obesity.

Therefore

a person who eats meat or fish regularly would consume more cholesterol

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their body than a vegetarian or vegan, which leads to a higher chance of getting those diseases.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

138 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Plant-based diet
Chronic diseases
Greenhouse gas emissions
Deforestation
Water consumption
Mitigate climate change
Natural resources
Animal welfare
Humane and ethical choice
Healthcare costs
Sustainable farming
Legumes
Fruits and vegetables
Vegetarian
Vegan

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

In some pleces old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. discuss both views and give your opinion

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