The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the modifications from 1950 to 2010 at West
park
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Park
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Secondary School.
Overall
, we see that school all
time
have been
on
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in
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the
place
,but in 1980
it
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they
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expand and started to be a main building,
add
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adding
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science
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a science
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block
which
stay
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stays
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and in 2010. In 1950 and 1980 playground has similar space, but in 2010 it decrease
on
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by
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a third. And
on
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in
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this
place
located
a
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apply
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sports fields
however
in 1980 was bigger
in
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by
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three
time
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times
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, and in 1950in
this
place
was a farmland which disappeared over
time
.
Although
, in 1950 was houses near
main
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the main
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road and schools,
but
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apply
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with
time
modified
in
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into
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car
park
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parks
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and
science
block
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blocks
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.
Car
park
with
time
expanded and took up half of the area.
Main
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The main
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road
always
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was always
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located
on
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in
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one
place
firstly
across the houses and school, and after 1980 across the schools,
science
block
and
car
park
. Farmland and houses disappeared from the map,
playground
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the playground
a playground
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was abridged, and there were built
science
block
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blocks
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,
car
park
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parks
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and sports
field
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fields
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.
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