The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the modifications from 1950 to 2010 at West
park
Secondary School.
Correct your spelling
Park
Overall
, we see that school all time
have been on
the Change preposition
in
place
,but in 1980 it
expand and started to be a main building, Correct pronoun usage
they
add
Wrong verb form
adding
science
Correct article usage
a science
block
which stay
and in 2010. In 1950 and 1980 playground has similar space, but in 2010 it decrease Change the verb form
stays
on
a third. And Change preposition
by
on
Change preposition
in
this
place
located a
sports fields Correct article usage
apply
however
in 1980 was bigger in
three Change preposition
by
time
, and in 1950in Change to a plural noun
times
this
place
was a farmland which disappeared over time
. Although
, in 1950 was houses near main
road and schools, Correct article usage
the main
but
with Remove the conjunction
apply
time
modified in
Change preposition
into
car
park
and Fix the agreement mistake
parks
science
block
. Fix the agreement mistake
blocks
Car
park
with time
expanded and took up half of the area. Main
road Change the article
The main
always
located Add a missing verb
was always
on
one Change preposition
in
place
firstly
across the houses and school, and after 1980 across the schools, science
block
and car
park
.
Farmland and houses disappeared from the map, playground
was abridged, and there were built Add an article
the playground
a playground
science
block
, Fix the agreement mistake
blocks
car
park
and sports Fix the agreement mistake
parks
field
.Fix the agreement mistake
fields
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