The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
#information #professions #k #salaries #hours #week #profession #report #university #lecturer #summarise #informahtion #features #comparisons
The given bad charts show the
salary
comparison of different four vocations; police, nurse, fire fighter
and underground driver in the UK, Correct your spelling
firefighter
while
the table provides the data of
the average Change preposition
on
hours
per weel
for these professions. Correct your spelling
week
Overall
, all professions have experienced a slight increase in salary
over three years, with the salary
range for four jobs ranging from 38h to 55h.
Firstly
, working individuals in all occupations have seen a slight increase in their income compared to when they started working. Police workers were initially
paid ￡21000 rising to ￡23000 after three years. I
the same way, Correct your spelling
In
income
of Correct article usage
the income
nurse
went from ￡18000 to ￡19000, firefighters Fix the agreement mistake
nurses
￡40000
to ￡41000, and the highest Change preposition
from ￡40000
salary
belongs to underground drivers ￡50000
to ￡51000.
Change preposition
from ￡50000
Secondly
, average working hours
are between ￡38 and ￡55, and there is a correlation between the amount of pay and working hours
except underground
drivers, The average working Change preposition
for underground
hours
of policemen is 40h, nurses 38h, and firefighters 55h, which
means that the longer they work, the more income they gain. Correct word choice
while
However
, only underground driver
can earn the highest Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
salary
of ￡50000 to ￡51000 as described above, though they work the shortest 36h weekly.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words salary, hours, h with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
▼