“Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?”

It is true that more and more

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is being used to track

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's actions, and many

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do not realise that

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development could be beneficial to companies and the government, I personally believe that the drawbacks of

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advancement outweigh the advantages

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the probability of detrimental issues that can be caused by monitoring. On the one hand, some

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argue that monitoring should be encouraged because it helps the government to guarantee the safety of citizens.

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, CCTV installed on the street could be useful to reduce the incidence of crime

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as theft and robbery by monitoring.

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, the problem is that

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is

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very fragile to the danger of hacking, so many cyber criminals are occurring these days. In South Korea,

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, the rate of crimes utilised by monitor

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surged recently, becoming a serious social problem. As

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example shows, the improvement of

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exerts a negative influence on society.

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, unnecessary supervision by using

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would make

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uncomfortable. It is a well-known fact that many companies are monitoring their customer behaviours on social network services and smartphones to promote their products to the right targets.

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aggressive marketing method by using monitored data has made

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exposed to bothersome advertising.

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but not least, there are many privacy issues caused by the

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the evolution of social media citizen's personal information is uploaded to the Internet without their permission. In conclusion, even though the development of

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brought many benefits to our society,

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, it is undeniable that there are many more detrimental effects of

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development.

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, I firmly believe that much should be done by the government to deal with

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danger of

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