Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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this
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sport
are Fix the agreement mistake
sports
paramount
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a paramount
preciuos
, as Correct your spelling
precious
forieng
country has Correct your spelling
foreign
monentary
, few nations achieve international sport by providing specialised Correct your spelling
monetary
facilities
to train top elite sports, Use synonyms
instead
of providing sports Linking Words
facilitites
that everyone can utilize. I do think Correct your spelling
facilities
this
is Linking Words
negative
development for our young era. Add an article
a negative
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the
both view with my opinion.
On the one hand, It is Remove the article
apply
good
sign for Add an article
a good
country
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the country
a country
for
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to
provide
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providing
facilities
for only top athletes, Use synonyms
However
, it would be Linking Words
benificial
for Correct your spelling
beneficial
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the country
country
development, Change noun form
country's
for instance
, In Linking Words
india
2020, peoples require for Change the capitalization
India
olympics
, so our minister has Change the capitalization
Olympics
choose
top Change the verb form
chosen
ethlits
for Correct your spelling
athletes
this
game, and as well provided training for international sport, but he was not won in that game, If we will select Linking Words
traning
for only athletes, does not mean that they will win. Correct your spelling
training
Furthermore
, It would be Linking Words
also
helpful for Linking Words
government
to increase in Add an article
the government
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the economy
economy
sector, If Replace the word
economic
athelets
win the game, Correct your spelling
athletes
additionally
, Linking Words
Player
address the name with patriotism.
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Players
On the other hand
, Other Linking Words
peoples
will get bored at home, Fix the agreement mistake
people
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citizen
not participated in any sports, Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
so
they will face issues Correct word choice
apply
such
as obesity, and as well heart Linking Words
desease
. Correct your spelling
disease
Furthemore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
Goverment
need to pay for Correct your spelling
government
thier
health, so it would be Correct your spelling
their
Correct article usage
an extetive
extetive
amount of loss. Correct your spelling
extensive
Moreover
, Government will face Linking Words
economy
problems more, Replace the word
economic
however
, If Linking Words
Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
provide Correct your spelling
government
governments
facilities
for everyone Use synonyms
then
they will try hard, and they will get result for Linking Words
participate
, Wrong verb form
participating
also
more people can participate they can win more battles.
In conclusion, Providing Linking Words
the
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apply
facilities
for only top athletes it will bad Use synonyms
impcat
on Correct your spelling
impact
peoples
, and Fix the agreement mistake
people
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the desease
desease
ratio will increase, so it would be Correct your spelling
disease
great
impact economic sector. My Correct article usage
a great
opinon
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opinion
that
government should give Add a missing verb
is that
facilities
to everyone.Use synonyms
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