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In many countries, young people are richer, they have not only security but also they are healthier than ever before. However, they seem unhappy. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to overcome this problem?

#countries #people #security
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 youths are getting financially independent, more secure and physically fit. ,
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 hasn't resulted much in their happiness indexes. In
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 factors and suggest some solutions to overcome these issues.
Firstly
, the Moderns
generation
 is equipped with numerous choices for everything in their daily needs.
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 to maintain
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mental happiness,
one
 must master the skills of choosing the best among limited choices and
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 of content fullness.
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 proven that maximisers
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,e those who are always craving for
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 of choices are
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 less
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 when compared with
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satisfiers
satisfies
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 those who are finding the needs. To overcome these situations,
one
 must cultivate the
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 of finding the best from
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viable
available
 fewer options without worrying
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others
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 status and taste. Lack of spiritual and emotional balance is the key reason often current
generation
 had to deal
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 combat
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joylessness. Enrolling in appropriate spiritual programmes or approaching
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 development coach, will
eductae
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educate
 them with the magnitude of gratitude and
contentfullness
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content fullness
one
 has to carry for the
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privileges
 they have. For eg,
this
 new
generation
 can leverage the benefits offered
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 online programmes by mental health coaches ranging from breathing
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 to yoga programmes.
On the other hand
, chasing
monetory
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monetary
 numbers to
conquor
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conquer
 just financial success often lead to increased depression rates. To
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,
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 there
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 no issues on financial burdens and social welfare,
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generation
 often struggles to find
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mental peace
due to
 comparisons and virtual trends set by youths.
One
 can overcome these situations and start finding bliss by implementing some of the solutions proposed above
such
 as not
regreting
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regretting
 on the chosen
decissions
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decisions
 and practising spiritual exercises.
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