Write a letter of application to mrs hopkins the oganizer of the trip,telling her: -why would you like to go on the trip -what skills do you have -what previous experience

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Dear Mrs Hopkins, I hope you are doing well, my name is Anand, I'm living in Dammam city. Recently, I have seen your advertisement about a scuba diving trip to the half moon beach. I'm really excited to join the occasion. Scuba diving makes me happier and I have some memories of that.

Last

year I did it with my friends. In the month of January, I received a professional diver "C" certificate with 5 hours of training. I bought my scuba diving gear, glasses, suit and action camera

also

Last

year, during the holidays, spent time diving.

Along with

one guide, I and my friends took a one-speed boat and reached Jubail Beach. And there we spent almost a day on the beach doing

this

activity. During the trip, we enjoyed ourselves a lot and took many photos. So, please consider me to join the trip. Yours sincerely, Anand

Submitted by anand.gnt92 on Mon May 29 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter of application to mrs hopkins the oganizer of the trip,telling her: -why would you like to go on the trip -what skills do you have -what previous experience

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Every country should have a free healthcare service, if this means the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

The most important role of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples form your own knowledge or experience.

Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category- 2002