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Some people believe school children should help to create rules their schools. Others say teacher alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #school #children #rules #schools #teacher
Nowadays people tend to believe
teachers
fair
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 enough to set the
rules
,
while
 others consider
school
children
 should help the
school
 when it comes to
set
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setting
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 the
rules
.
This
 essay will
going
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 to discuss both of these views and give an opinion
how
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on how
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 to make
children
 and teacher
be
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complementary to each other.
First,
teachers
 play a crucial role
for
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in
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 setting a regulation at any
school
. In
other word
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, based on
a
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the
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 massive experience that
teachers
 have, they must share their experience to set up a
school
 system.
Moreover
,
Teachers
 see the
school
 from
different
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 angle as they work
their
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they're
they are
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 not learning.
Overall
teachers
 should be taken into account.
On the other hand
,
children
 might
be consider
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be considered
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 as an additional factor but they are not. The main reason given to support
this
 claim is that they
shring
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sharing
shrink
 every moment with each other so it is not fair enough to set
a
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apply
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restrictive
rules
 for
a
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apply
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children
 as a robot. In other
word
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words
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,
children
 should be in a
decision making
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decision-making
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 process indirectly
this
 is mainly
due to
 their tendency for
entertaining
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entertainment
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 so the process might be through
survey
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surveys
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,
questionnaire
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questionnaires
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, etc. In conclusion,
although
teachers
 consider a virtual and
favor
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favour
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 for building a system of
rules
 in a
school
.
Children
 could reach
a more tangible and flexible
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more tangible and flexible rules
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rules
 as
the
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they
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 experienced the real
school
 nature and what it is needing.
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