The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the changing
number
of shops that were newly opened and bankrupted in a specific country in a seven-year span. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is noticeable that despite all the fluctuations, the opened merchants showed a more stable pattern, Linking Words
while
the closed ones exhibited the opposite.
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According to
the data, the Linking Words
number
of new merchants had a more stable pattern than the closed ones. Having started at about 8.500 Use synonyms
stores
in 2011, the Use synonyms
number
of kiosks fell dramatically to merely 4.000 Use synonyms
stores
in 2012 before gradually increasing to 6,000 Use synonyms
stores
in 2014, slightly lower than the Use synonyms
number
of bankrupted kiosks in that year. Use synonyms
Then
it decreased to 4,000 and remained stable for the next two years, from 2015 to 2017, and declined to only 3,000 in 2018.
Turning to the closed Linking Words
stores
, it captured a more erratic trend. Starting at just above 6,000 Use synonyms
stores
, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
stores
rose to just above 7,000 Use synonyms
stores
in 2013 before plunging to around 500 Use synonyms
stores
in 2015, making it the lowest Use synonyms
number
of merchants Use synonyms
among
all years. Change preposition
in
Furthermore
, it increased dramatically to above 5,000 Linking Words
stores
in 2016 and levelled off for the following two years. (200 words)Use synonyms
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