Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure avtivites. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Over the past few decades, there is a significant change happened in the
life
of a human. It is a public opinion that-, People
spend most of their time
doing work
. While
,
only less Remove the comma
apply
time
for fun activities. In my opinion, There is
more demerits than merits. Change the verb form
are
Therefore
, following
this
essay will explain the pros and cons with examples and will reach a proper conclusion.
To embark with, Nowadays, everyone is busy in
their own Change preposition
with
life
. However
, we should balance our professional and personal work
. If we work
continuously it will lead to mental as well as
physical problems. For instance
, A survey conducted by the World health
organization (WHO) in 2018, clearly stated that-, the main reason for cardiac and hypertension is work
stress. People
are more concerned with work
and not giving any free time
for themselves. Consequently
, it will reflect badly, to
Change preposition
on
the
human beings. Correct article usage
apply
Due to
the pressure from work
, So many people
will go through depression or mood swings. Some people
attempt suicide. Even though, they are working hard but still not getting good results. So, People
must spend time
on their own. It is really important for life
. Giving Some time
for leisure activities will give more happiness and also
energy for doing new tasks.
On the other hand
, Working so long hours sometimes give you money and appreciation. But it will spoil your Health
. Health
is wealth. If the worker does more work
, some companies, provide rewards or incentives to encourage employees. So the employees become happy and they work
even more
harder for the next month. Change the word
apply
This
is a business trick, But People
could 'nt understand this
. Because they want the incentives. For example
, In India, most of the companies will provide overtime payment. Definitely, the person from the low-class family will work
after the duty hours for the OT payment. On the one side, it is beneficial for them. With this
money, they can run the family happy. But it will destroy a person's health
.
To conclude
, money can't buy happiness. We have only one life
. So enjoy life
by balancing work
and leisure time
. It will give you a prosperous and happy life
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