Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure avtivites. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Over the past few decades, there is a significant change happened in the
life
of a human. It is a public opinion that-,
People
spend most of their
time
doing
work
.
While
,
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only less
time
for fun activities. In my opinion, There
is
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more demerits than merits.
Therefore
,
following
this
essay will explain the pros and cons with examples and will reach a proper conclusion. To embark with, Nowadays, everyone is busy
in
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their own
life
.
However
, we should balance our professional and personal
work
. If we
work
continuously it will lead to mental
as well as
physical problems.
For instance
, A survey conducted by the World
health
organization (WHO) in 2018, clearly stated that-, the main reason for cardiac and hypertension is
work
stress.
People
are more concerned with
work
and not giving any free
time
for themselves.
Consequently
, it will reflect badly,
to
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the
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human beings.
Due to
the pressure from
work
, So many
people
will go through depression or mood swings. Some
people
attempt suicide. Even though, they are working hard but still not getting good results. So,
People
must spend
time
on their own. It is really important for
life
. Giving Some
time
for leisure activities will give more happiness and
also
energy for doing new tasks.
On the other hand
, Working so long hours sometimes give you money and appreciation. But it will spoil your
Health
.
Health
is wealth. If the worker does more
work
, some companies, provide rewards or incentives to encourage employees. So the employees become happy and they
work
even
more
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harder for the next month.
This
is a business trick, But
People
could 'nt understand
this
. Because they want the incentives.
For example
, In India, most of the companies will provide overtime payment. Definitely, the person from the low-class family will
work
after the duty hours for the OT payment. On the one side, it is beneficial for them. With
this
money, they can run the family happy. But it will destroy a person's
health
.
To conclude
, money can't buy happiness. We have only one
life
. So enjoy
life
by balancing
work
and leisure
time
. It will give you a prosperous and happy
life
.
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