The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
These maps illustrate the developmental strategies which are going to
taken
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place in
this
industrial region in the town of Norbiton.
Overall
, as we can see, a number of things are going to be constructed
such
as
school
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,
playground
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, and shops, and at the same time, some features would still stay the same as they are now. Looking at the future map, it is easily apparent that
this
area is going to become a residential region. In order to accomplish
this
goal, a myriad of features need to be changed. Housing,
for example
, will be evenly built around the main square which is located in the middle and remained the same.
Moreover
, there is going to be a small square built on the south side of the area which is connected to the main one
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and
also
many shops and a medical
center
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will be constructed between them. If we go over the river to the north by a bridge which is planned to be constructed, a great number of houses can be seen which are built near the farmland, on the southern part of the river. To the east of the territory, a playground and a school are about to be added.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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