Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Spending

hours

on smartphones by

children

is a great danger, and a negative development in my opinion, Which will be discussed in

this

essay. Smartphones became an essential tool in our daily life. Unfortunately,

this

device became essential for some

children

too. Nowadays, some parents let their

children

spend

hours

using smart mobiles, to get rid of their responsibilities for a

while

or even

hours

. Other parents claim that they downloaded useful educational applications on their

children

’s tablets to help in developing their skills.

Furthermore

, some do not even supervise the content that their kids are exposed to through the smartphone’s different applications. It is well known that negative development is the effect of the

excess

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usage of technology by

children

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Because the number of new diseases and child development

deficiency

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deficiencies

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has increased. The number of

Children

who have ” Autism” is increasing and some studies related the increasing numbers to the changed habits of

children

. In the past,

Children

used to rely on their imagination and creativity to entertain themselves like playing with blocks and interacting with other

children

, now they are using applications which give them fake

experience

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and expose them to very high stimulations affecting their behaviour and concentration, even their educational progress.

Although

using technology is important,

children

are meant to learn new skills

by

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the actual experiment not from behind screens. Parents with help from the teachers should develop new ways or even back to the traditional ways to help youth develop their skills and limit the number of

hours

spent using any means of technology.