The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the
quantity
of many categories of vegetables exported to Change the quantifier
number
Qatar
and Oman
in 1990, with the unit is
in tons kilogram.
Unnecessary verb
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Overall
, what stands out from the chart is Oman
imported more vegetables than Qatar
. Another striking factor is that both countries imported a lot of garlic and spinach. Moreover
, both countries imported the same type of vegetables in 1990.
In 1990, either Qatar
or Oman
imported 300 tons kilogram of ginger. While
ginger account for a fifth in total in Qatar
, it occupied a minority in Oman
. Moreover
, spinach had a
high data in both countries (450 in Correct article usage
apply
Qatar
and 600 in Oman
).
One prominent feature of this
data is while
garlic made up a third in Oman
, it constituted more than a fifth in Qatar
, at 800 and 340 respectively. In contrast
, not only Qatar
but also
Oman
imported a few of
broccoli, at 220 for Change preposition
apply
former
and 300 for the latter.Correct article usage
the former
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