The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the
quantity
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of many categories of vegetables exported to
Qatar
and
Oman
in 1990, with the unit
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in tons kilogram.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is
Oman
imported more vegetables than
Qatar
. Another striking factor is that both countries imported a lot of garlic and spinach.
Moreover
, both countries imported the same type of vegetables in 1990. In 1990, either
Qatar
or
Oman
imported 300 tons kilogram of ginger.
While
ginger account for a fifth in total in
Qatar
, it occupied a minority in
Oman
.
Moreover
, spinach had
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high data in both countries (450 in
Qatar
and 600 in
Oman
). One prominent feature of
this
data is
while
garlic made up a third in
Oman
, it constituted more than a fifth in
Qatar
, at 800 and 340 respectively.
In contrast
, not only
Qatar
but
also
Oman
imported a few
of
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broccoli, at 220 for
former
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and 300 for the latter.
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