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Many people today are not as fit and active as people used to be in the past and this is a danger to their long-term health. What do you think are the reasons for this ? What measures can you suggest to reduce this problem ?

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Now most
people
 are physically unfit and inactive which was not part of the
people
.
This
 problem is going to threaten their long-term health.Now
people
 are not fit
due to
 junk
food
 ,
,
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 most of the farmers produce chemicals in their
food
 which are bought from the market for
food
.
Besides
 some business
people
 preserve their
food
 for a long day,they are using various chemical in their
food
 which is highly harmful to health.
This
 essay will discuss in brief why
people
 are not fit and active and reduce the solution. Now
people
 are not physically fit and active
due to
 feeling weak and they are losing their energy in long-term work and at a sudden time they are feeling sick.
For example
, the Population is increasing day by day another side the cultivation
field
 is reducing to the placement of extra
people
.They are making a home in the
field
. As a
,
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result farmers are producing crops for the large population in the small
field
.,
Accordingly
 they are using chemicals in the
field
 for large production. Another Example,Some business
people
 to get extra profit they are making
food
 using various types of chemicals and sometimes they
also
 use formalin in fruits to produce putrefied. in the circumstance, we are going to unfit in our daily life.when we buy
food
 from the market after that we will wash it well for a long time before making
food
.on top of that when we should buy fruits to be conscious and check well.Another option could be,we should regular exercise for body fitness. In conclusion,
People
 said that Health is wealth.so to protect our bodies we should maintain a daily routine.
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