The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of
households
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owning and renting
accommodation
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, the percentage of
households
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in owned
accommodation
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increased through the period with a
slightly
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decrease
at the end
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while
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the statistic of
households
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in rented
accommodation
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declined in the given period without a little rise in the final year.
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with, the proportion of
households
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renting
accommodation
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decreased from around 77% in 1918 to lower than 70% in 1939 followed by a 14-year plateau.
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, the figure of it declined dramatically from almost 70% in 1953 to slightly bigger than 30% in 2001.
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, it rose
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around 5% to likely 36% in 2011. The percentage of people who lived in their own houses or apartments increased significantly from about 22% in 1918 to almost 70% in 2001. The figure reached
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the same level as living in rented
accommodation
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in 1971 and surpassed since
then
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.
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, the statistic of
households
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in owned dwellings decreased to about 63% in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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