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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear Irina, It is very exciting that you’ll be moving to London and congratulations on your new job! I looked up your company’s address, and I assumed that you will be working in the Sydney Central Business District area, perhaps you can think about living near me in Mascot.
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 is a recently developed suburban, and it is 20 minutes from the CBD area. There are many shops, cafes, and restaurants which has a friendly and relaxed vibe. In term of public
transport
, there is various
transport
 available,
such
 as buses, trains, trams and ferries. You need an Opal card to pay for the travel, which I’ll help you with. With the Opal card, you just need to tap on and off without having to buy a ticket each time.
In addition
, you can
also
 use your credit/debit card to pay for the
transport
 as well. Don’t expect the
transport
 will arrive on time, as it is very crowded in the peak hour. I’ll introduce you to my friends, and flatmates and I’m sure you’ll make friends at work too, as the people here are very friendly. You can
also
 find hobbies which is an alternative way to find friends. I can’t wait to see you soon! Have a safe flight! Best wishes, Janice
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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