Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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trend of buying own auto, which

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ultimately resulted shocking in choking traffic and I fully agree with

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practice by improving the public shipment system and making it more attractive than private vehicles. In

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30 years increased various sedans and per capita income, that

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led to

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enormous rise in ownership.

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made the process more easier and available.

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has led to “one big traffic jam”.

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, most of the cities in the world, like Moscow and New York, have an unrealistically large number of cars,

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get blocked during working hours.

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, the motor industry made the problem more grave. Governments have to address

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issue by promoting public transportation

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, metro and metropolitan. Making it cheaper and more comfortable,

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of public vehicles, which will lead to an increase in passengers, because often people prefer private transit

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bus pressure and violation of personal boundaries.

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, the nation must do high taxes for buying

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, thereby stimulating people to use public shipment.

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is a world problem, and if the government doesn’t do hard decisions it lead to catastrophic consequences. It should more radically change politically to car owners

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increase necessary compensation and providing public buses.