Some people say that children should learn all the subjects equally. Whereas other think that they should only learn what they are intrested in. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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In other words
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the subject
Therefore
, learning all the subjects
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children
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are interested
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Moreover
, it is necessary for teachers to improve their class content. The more interesting in class, the more children
like
.
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To conclude
, although
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subject
what they are interested in. I still think children
should learn all the subjects
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