The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

yes ,It is true that the utilization of

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takes place

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problems

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as hacking ,

cyber crime

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etc

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that

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furthermore

, the

government

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should take some

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steps

to stop the usage of

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the internet

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internet

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Internet

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the easy accessibility of the

internet

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people are finding new ways to commit a crime .There are many fraudulent websites that are meant to hack personal information like bank account details and addresses.

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, many of them were easily trapped through the links and lost their money. even many users can get suspicious emails from unknown .

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,many times

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get an email about winning money and

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they ask me to give my account information . to save people from

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crimes

government

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should ban the websites .

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to that , the uncontrol utility of the

internet

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is making a negative impact on youngsters. many teenagers get addicted and spoil their lives which results in many cases of suicide.

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online games named pubg that cause a main impact on children.so the young ones are the future of the country their safety is the primary thing for us.

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government

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the government

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should encounter

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apply

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cyber bullying

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cyberbullying

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, the important era of media and technology is that criminals use the

internet

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as an easy source to do

crime

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crimes

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, it is the responsibility of the

government

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to save people's lives by controlling misleading information on the

internet

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