Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. 1. Apologize for damaging the product 2. Explain what happened 3. Say how are you going to fix the issue

Dear Mahesh, I hope you are doing well.

Last

month, I took your television to watch IPL cricket matches. Do you remember that? Actually, that tv was broken. Smart tv was set up on the table properly and

last

night my cat Nappi jumped on that, and it fell down. The display got cracks and it showed some lines. My sincere apology for

this

damage to your tv. I know how much money you spent on

this

. But, unfortunately, the accident happened. Immediately, I called the service centre and raised the complaint. Today morning, one service person came and check the screen. And he explained that it can be repaired. Need to order a new display, with his guidance ordered a new screen. hopefully, it will reach by next Monday, and the service executive will come and it fixes. I hope you will agree to the new replacement of the screen. Your love Anand

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

154 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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