You recently stayed at your friend place to look after the house while he /she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his /her house. write a letter to your friend. in this letter: Describe what the accident was Explain when it happened Suggest how the manage can be fixed.

Dear John, How're you? I hope

this

letter finds you well in health and spirit. I'm writing

this

letter to inform you about the priceless spot which I broke accidentally. Here I'ld like to share my worst experience with you.

Firstly

, I want to tell you, during the dusting and cleaning at your house that time I damaged your flower pot that was gifted by your grandmother on your 25th birthday and it is very close to your heart.

Furthermore

due to

my , careless

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behaviour

behaviourur

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your decorating pot fell down on the floor and it was totally broken. That accident happened on 27th April when you were going out for a week to spend time with your family. All in all, please give me some suggestions regarding my careless action which happened during your absence because I feel down to dump. So, I will give a similar piece pot which I broke

as well as

another type of decorating wall painting which helps to enhance your house's beauty. Please write soon. With regards, Eva.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

175 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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