overpopultarion in many major uraban cities is a serios problem. What are the causes of it? How can this problem be solved?
In modern society, a large number of people tend to live in major urban 
cities
, leading to Use synonyms
overpopulation
. Use synonyms
This
 is mainly because of Linking Words
governments
' city-centred developments and a lack of employment in rural Use synonyms
areas
. There are a number of solutions that should be implemented to deal with Use synonyms
overpopulation
.
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Firstly
, the reason most individuals live in the central Linking Words
cities
 lies in the excessive city developments of Use synonyms
governments
. Many governmental bodies have a tendency to develop their main Use synonyms
cities
 Use synonyms
such
 as Seoul, London, Tokyo, and New York because the Linking Words
development
 of the capital Use synonyms
cities
 can lead to various economic and cultural benefits in competence with other countries. These include well-organized infrastructures Use synonyms
such
 as transportation, residential Linking Words
areas
, institutional facilities, and public spaces. For these reasons, the majority of the citizens congregate in the main urban Use synonyms
cities
 to enjoy a lifestyle in the city. Use synonyms
Secondly
, many Linking Words
companies
 tend to offer their employment positions in major Use synonyms
cities
. Use synonyms
This
 is because the city-based workplace can have many advantages in business Linking Words
such
 as recruiting workers, investments in foreign Linking Words
companies
, and recognition of a company brand. Use synonyms
This
 phenomenon encourages the public to live in major Linking Words
cities
.
There are two effective solutions to the problem of Use synonyms
overpopulation
 in Use synonyms
cities
. One way to tackle Use synonyms
this
 is the Linking Words
development
 of minor Use synonyms
cities
 by Use synonyms
governments
. By implementing rural Use synonyms
development
 policies, Use synonyms
governments
 can provide a wide range of beneficiaries Use synonyms
such
 as supplements of residential spaces, creating public zones, establishing educational Linking Words
areas
, and promoting local cultural heritage. Another method of dealing with Use synonyms
overpopulation
 in urban is to encourage private Use synonyms
companies
 to move their facilities to minor Use synonyms
cities
 by offering financial assistance. Use synonyms
Along with
 Linking Words
this
, many Linking Words
companies
 can take into account their facilities Use synonyms
such
 as laboratories, research and Linking Words
development
 spaces, and factories. It might be able to lessen the Use synonyms
overpopulation
 of Use synonyms
cities
. 
In conclusion, Use synonyms
governments
' determinations for the Use synonyms
development
 of their minor Use synonyms
cities
 and the assistance of private Use synonyms
companies
 are effective in dealing with the issue. If Use synonyms
governments
 implemented these policies, many people would soon consider living in other Use synonyms
areas
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instead
 of Linking Words
cities
.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite