You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The presented line graph illustrates the number of crimes committed by people of different ages and the pie chart displays the types of crime
last
year, in the UK.
Overall
, young children and senior citizens engaged in the least criminal activities whereas
the crime rate was the highest among teenagers and adults. Moreover
, out of all the felonies, almost half of them were of violent nature and the least of them were of public order.
The graph depicts that children up to the age of 8 did not engage in any criminal activities while
the number increased to almost 5000 in the case of 12-year-olds. The 20-year-olds conducted 80,000 felonies; meanwhile, the number decreased drastically among people in the late 20s, dropping to 20,000 among the 28-year-olds. The rate in folks from the 50s-60s was less than 10,000.
According to
the pie chart, almost half of the offences were violent. Property and drug crimes shared a similar percentage of around 20% while
only 9% of crimes were of public order.Submitted by shwetapanchal172 on
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