You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery • Explain the importance of this delivery • Ask for a replacement item to be sent

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about my online

order

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of some books which received incomplete and requesting you to send the remaining book.

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, I would like to give you my

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details as my online booking number is 2RE4ASK. Which has been ordered on May 10, 2023. There were two books in the

order

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. Both were from the author David A. Kessler. The end of overeating and Your food is fooling you. After receiving the parcel, I got only one which was The End of Overeating. I was wondering if you could arrange the missing book because it will be a present to my nephew on his birthday on May 28, 2023. He is a bit unconscious about his health and my concern is to make him aware of food and advertisement to show him how they lure people to buy their products which are generally unhealthy. I would be grateful if you could possibly help me to speed things up in the delivery process in

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to receive the remaining book Your food is fooling you.

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, I would like to mention the payment which has been done during the

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time. The payment and

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receipt has been attached to the letter for your review. I trust that you will give

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matter your immediate attention. Yours faithfully, Mandeep Singh

mandeepsinghsony2022

May 30, 2023

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