The diagram below shows the process of using water to generate electricity for human use.

The diagram below shows the process of using water to generate electricity for human use.
The diagram illustrates how heat production through the use of water. First of all, the sun starts to heat the sea, and no sooner than the sea is warm,
rain
evaporates. That situation creates clouds, they transfer
rain
. After raining, the dam gets full of
this
drink. The water does not overflow in the reservoir by means of a system. The dam has a valve which might be open or closed. If the dam’s valve is open, the drink turns around the turbine, pump and reservoir.
Firstly
, the
rain
reaches the turbine and
then
it reaches the pump. The pump returns
rain
to the reservoir again. That stage repeats every time. When the
rain
arrives the turbine, helps high voltage cables transfer to each other and the electricity transfers to the transformer station
at the end
of all processes.
Finally
, service is delivered via underground cables to all residential areas and ındustrial areas like hospitals, fabric and houses. People can use it.
Overall
, electricity is produced thanks to drinking from the sea, it comprises over ten stages.
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