The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
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The chart illustrates how much money was spent on six products in Germany, Italy, France and Britain in four European countries. Generally, there is a significant difference between Britain’s consumers and the other three countries' consumers. British consumed the highest amount of cash and ranked first for each item the opposite was true for German people.
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, the British consumed mostly the allocated budget on photographic film and they spent the bill on the lowest Personel stereos and tennis racquets, approximately 170 thousand pounds and just under 160 respectively.
On the other hand
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, German people did not show remarkable change for any item, and they had the lowest value except perfumes and tennis racquets. Italian people preferred photographic movies and toys, they spent less payment on personal stereos. French citizens saw a huge gap between photographic film and perfumes, they spent the highest amount on photographic film and the inverse was true for smell, just over 160 and around 150 , respectively.
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, the four European countries' citizens mostly bought Photographic films and they spend money less on Personel stereos, tennis racquets and aroma than toys and CDs.
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