You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

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Dears college
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Dear College
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magazine
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Magazine
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management, Hope
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letter finds you well. As a loyal student of the college cafeteria, who spends a lot of time in it daily, I'm sending
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letter now to inform you about some points I have regarding it. Actually,
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comfortable space allows us to study easily and feel like we are at home, a friendly atmosphere which we look at in every other cafe, but me and my friends
notices
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some things lately that must be improved.
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, I have some notes that would like to tell you about. First of all, the menu really needs some new items and recipes, variation is hardly needed.
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, some of the furniture is old and
need
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renovation.
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kindly the place needs to be more quiet, so just put down the music volume level. Please accept our
improvements
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ideas as loyal students and customers who want you to be the best. Regards, Your sincere clients,
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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