The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
minutes
(in billions
) of telephone calls in the UK, which is divided into three categories, between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
, it is obvious that throughout all years local fixed line
was the most viral among citizens of UK
. Correct article usage
the UK
However
, reversed positions seems
to appear in Change the verb form
seem
mobile
calls category. Correct article usage
the mobile
In addition
, over the period
, number
of national and international fixed, and mobile calls were gaining popularity, Change the article
a number
the number
whereas
local line
remained unchanged Fix the agreement mistake
lines
at the end
of the period
.
From 1995 to 1999 local-fixed line
experienced a slight increase in terms of billions
of minutes
, from 70 to 90. Then
, by contrast
, people started using local line
calss
less, and by the end of the Correct your spelling
class
calls
period
Add a comma
,period
local-
Correct your spelling
local line
line
calls
usage dropped to its initial amount of Correct subject-verb agreement
call
minutes
.
Between 1995 and 1999 national and international fixed
Add a hyphen
fixed-line
line
and mobile consumption increased at the same rate; from about 36 to 50 and 3 to 12 respectively. The grow
rate of Replace the word
growth
minutes
in billions
increased gradually until the end of the period
in mobile calls case, ending up with 45 billion minutes
and 61 billions
using national and international fixed Change to singular
billion
line
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