A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most.  In your letter, •describe what this book was about, •explain how this book influenced you, •say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to contribute to your "
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that influenced me most"
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that impact
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me a lot is In Searching The Tost Time
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Marcel Proust
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book
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want to describe the life of the writer,
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big Roman which divides
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as love, anxiety and..., the Novelist try to discover something that lost and he is searching in all over the roman and especially the sense of time and he
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to travel and want to back to the past for finding pleasure instant that lost.
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me because showed me the sense of being easy-going it says you can find happiness in the small works and a small
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and says
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don't try to achieve happiness
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searching and discovering, each person can be a source of the happiness
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I would like to suggest
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each person Thank you for
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and cooperation. Yours faithfully, Ali Irani
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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