You had a very good experience in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to a newspaper to tell them about it, describe what you liked about it, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you regarding The Caulfield Gazette’s request (15/10/13) to notify your newspaper of excellent businesses in the local area.

Last

night my husband and two children went to Mario’s Pizzeria on Hadfield Road for a meal and were delighted with our experience there. The staff were friendly and welcoming and the

overall

quality of service was excellent. Our orders arrived quickly, were hot, of a good size and inexpensive.

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the drinks were reasonably priced. We were particularly impressed when our children became a little impatient towards the end of the meal, the staff provided pencils and drawing material for them and greatly eased the burden of what had been a long and tiring day. I hope that you will publish

this

letter so that many other people in the area can enjoy

this

excellent restaurant and that it will thrive and be a part

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community for a long time to come, Yours sincerely, Felicity Maxwell

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

163 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Structure your letter

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