The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in canada in two different years.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in canada in two different years.
The graph given illustrates the used devices by the 18 to 25 age group in Canada used to watch television in two different years(2009_2018). At the onset, conventional
TV
was the highest device that people used in 2009 ,
while
tablets made up the lowest.
In contrast
, in 2019 flat -screen
TV
had the highest number of
users
,
whereas
conventional
TV
took the lowest point. The pie chart demonstrates that conventional
TV
had the most proportion of 34% of
users
in comparison to a mere 5% who used tablets in 2009.
Conversely
, in 2019, the lowest percentage of
users
was conventional
TV
,
whereas
flat-screen
TV
had the largest amount of
users
which accounted for 27%. Among the remaining instruments, in 2009 laptops had the highest number of device manipulators, accounting for 20% of the total.
This
accounted for quite similar proportions for both desktops and tablets approximately 18% and 5% respectively.The reverse is seen in 2019 when desktop computers and laptops had a constant percentage of 12% as opposed to tablet
users
rate which rose marginally to 19% in the next year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • 18 to 25 age group
  • devices
  • watch television
  • Canada
  • comparison
  • shift
  • preferences
  • mobile devices
  • traditional televisions
  • technological advancements
  • television viewing habits
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