The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the different stages of the production of
bricks
for the construction industry.
Overall
, there are 7 main stages in the process of how bricks
are produced, beginning with the digging of the clay
, and ending with the delivery to where they are sold.
In the first stage, using a digger machine, the clay
is dug and placed on a metal grid for the purpose of taking out the bigger clay
. Next,
after the clay
is mixed with sand and water, this
mixture underwent two options, one is cut by a wire cutter to become bricks
and the other is moulded to be
Change the verb form
be bricked
bricks
.
In the following step, the bricks
are dried in the oven for from
24 to 28 hours. After that, they continue to be experienced in the kiln with a moderate temperature of 200-800 Celsius, and a high temperature of 870 – 1300 Celsius. They are Change preposition
apply
then
put into a cooling chamber for 2 or 4 days before being packed. The last
step involves in delivery of bricks
in a large truck, transporting them to where they are sold.Submitted by mtgngocanh on
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