Some people believe that unpaid commuty service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some authorities think that secondary school must include unpaid community service as compulsory

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everyone. I agree with the given statement because

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inspires

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to help their younger schoolmates,

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, it brings holistic development to them.

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may start to feel stress can be eliminated by the appropriate guidance of teachers. The main reason is that

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understand the value of helping each other,

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the way sharing their knowledge. When they start taking part in

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tasks without payment they get information about their social needs and

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understand their own value that how they can help many people. To give a clear example, many schools have started programs in vacation time when

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of higher

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visit the ruler area and teach

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activity helps

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to realise their knowledge can bring

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to other poor

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who are unable to visit the school

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or who are not very clever to understand the subject easily. The second main reason is complete development involves not only study but

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life lessons.

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work can help the people who really need it, and by getting aware of people's needs,

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may get help with what they need to do in the future parallel with their career.

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, In many, schools once a year, organize a donation program in which student set up their stall and

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of the day, they donate their earned money for other poor

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well-being.

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kind of activity inspired

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to be helpful to others in future

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are some drawbacks of unpaid

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community

service which create a burden in

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life,

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can be eliminated by teachers by giving the right advice and explaining the importance of

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work. Because appropriate guidance can help

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to make good decisions for society. In conclusion,

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there is a negligible disadvantage

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unpaid

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work,

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is essential for

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holistic development and for increasing their knowledge about the value of help.