Some people view conflict between teenagers and parents as a necessary part of growing up, while others view it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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will discuss relevant information. On the one hand, those who believe adolescent arguments can break the trust between
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children and their parents.
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disputes will often result in misunderstandings among the families.
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, it is quite common for youngsters to indulge in wrongdoings to impress their peers, but the results of it would bring confrontations with parents which in turn can create communication gaps in future.
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there will be a much greater sense of happiness among family members.,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • maturing
  • facilitates
  • independence
  • fosters
  • problem-solving skills
  • personal values
  • beliefs
  • potentially harmful
  • persistent misunderstandings
  • parent-child relationship
  • source of stress
  • anxiety
  • constructive conflict
  • managed
  • communication skills
  • fosters growth
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