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Nuclear Power is a necessary evil . Despite the potential human and environment consequences of radioactive fallout , nuclear energy is a genuine alternative to non-renewable energy sources like oil and coal, which are quickly running out . In short, the benefits of nuclear power for outweigh the risks of using it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays,
due to
 an increase in the use of technology, there are many and more appliances using electric
power
. It is a very big Infront
of
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 us, how to fulfil
this
 need. Some people argue that nuclear
energy
 is a good and long-lasting alternative to overcome the need for electricity. It can use as an alternative to Cole and oil, which are running out. It is very harmful to the environment as well. I will completely disagree with
this
 statement and discuss it in
the
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further
 essay.
Firstly
, it leaves unforgettable damage to the environment.
For instance
, when a nuclear bomb blasts, it spread out a lot of chemicals into the air which really harms humans, plants and other living things on
Earth
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surface.
Moreover
, the dangerous waste material still remains after production.
In addition
, that material is non-biodegradable which is do not mix with anything even not with soil and it the effect growth of trees and crops.
On the other hand
, there are many other resources available which can be used
an
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 electric production.
Nevertheless
,
besides
 using nuclear sources, we can adopt solar and water
power
 as alternatives, which is
also
 can help
for
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power
 generation.
Although
,
this
 kind of function is eco friendly and hasn't any harm to the environment. It is a long-time alternative to the problem of
power
 sources
for example
 if we discuss wind
energy
, it will never end up for centuries. In conclusion, in spite of the use of nuclear
power
 which is harmful to humanity, renewable
energy
 sources are best than nuclear
energy
. I totally disagree with those arguments, the benefits of nuclear are more than their cons.
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