The map show Southside,a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the indormation by selecting and repoting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These maps depict the differences in Grange Park from 1920 until now. It is clear from the diagram that there were many changes and some places were removed.
According to
what is shown there was a huge fountains
in the centre and next to it a stag for musicians. Change the noun form
fountain
However
, they removed the rose garden from the north and south sides to the middle of the park surrounded by seats, but they added an extra rose garden in the corner of the northwest.
Moreover
, there was a pond for water plants, but they replaced it with a children’s play area in the right corner and added a water feature in front of the children's zone. If you notice there was a parking area underground the park with a coffee beside the children's zone.
To sum up
, we could say that there were many altars, one of them the underground parking because in the
1920 it was not included.Change the article
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