It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

The possibility for
scientists
and
tourists
to be able to travel to remote natural environments has its pros and cons. Based on these, opinions could be made as to whether it is
positive
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or negative development. The disadvantages attached to
this
are, foremost, the exposure of the natural
environments
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environment
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to threatening circumstances
such
as increased pollution, poaching and damage to the surroundings for various reasons best suited to the visitors (
scientists
and
tourists
). There are examples all over the world where
tourists
litter the environment with substances that are non-biodegradable. They
also
directly and indirectly, destroy or enslave the wildlife in order to build infrastructures that benefit themselves.
Scientists
have been known to harm the environment in the name of science for various experiments. Their curiosity, if left unchecked, could lead them to even endanger the wildlife and the resources of the land.
Finally
, the issue of global warming
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is generated by human intervention. The erection or building of structures which contribute to the effects of global warming could lead to some irreversible consequences
such
as the melting of the ice caps in the south poles. Direct contact with these sources of global warming could speed up the melting process
thus
resulting in catastrophic events
such
as floods and other natural disasters.
Nonetheless
, there are advantages to the presence of
scientists
and
tourists
. Their exposure to these remote natural environments would provide a better understanding of the need to help preserve
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wildlife. There are many examples where
scientists
have been able to save endangered species. A
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the salvation of the Chinese pandas. Through cross-breeding, care, provision of medication and so on, good deeds could be done for
such
remote places.
Tourists
have
also
been known to adopt some of these animals
thus
providing the
much- needed
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funds to preserve their species.
Finally
, the knowledge obtained from visiting
such
places would
be very create
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an awareness for generations to come
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the wonders of the world currently occupied by us In summary, it could be said that
this
recent development could either have a positive or negative effect
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the long run, provided the reasons for
such
access.
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