One problem face by almost every larger city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

It is true that issues are

one

of the most concerning for the society. The

traffic

congestion nearly every big city faced that

problem

also

is becoming more widespread. There are several reasons for

this

problem

and various measures could be taken by the government and individuals to improve the situation There are a variety of different factors that have led to

traffic

.

Firstly

lack of public

transport

such

as trains, buses and the underground.,

Additionally

one

reason might be avoiding taking public

transport

inflexibility at the

time

so they decide not to waste their

time

waiting

moreover

according to

a survey in Alhamra magazine people every day lose

time

about 1-hour for

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public

transport

.

Secondly

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it is more convenient to drive their own car with no

one

with them everything is clean they do not need to stop many situations to reach their place

that is

why make

traffic

is worst.

On the other hand

, they are several ways to solve

this

problem

. First of all , the government had to work hard to solve that issue like increasing the number of the bus, and metro and making the

time

flies to use.

Then

make luxurious public

transport

for the rush people so that can be used.

One

good illustration for

this

,

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had been to Paris five years ago and I used the subway it was terrifying for me because

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was dressed up too much so I did not look like them

that is

why I had robbed since that I think a lot if we have luxury

transport

definitely I will use it In conclusion,

traffic

congestion is the most issue today. But the government play a big role in

this

problem

they must move forward to solve it. The best solution is to increase the number of public

transport

such

as buses, trains and ships