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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next

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The plans show Southwest an airport new ,next year after redevelopment.
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,the airport will be extended to provide more gates and other additional of other facilities that will offer more convenience for both arriving and departing passengers. After a year,it will work on increasing the number of cases to 18 and extend walkways to become bigger sky trains and in the
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 it will add shops with front remained unchanged security, passport
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 opposite passports
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, and customs. Additions of the facilities in the southwest direction will move to the cafe next to departing passengers before it was in Fort passport
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 and in front bog drop before passport
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 and replace place check-in became the face of departing . On the other side arriving put other cafes for passengers and add a machine ATM in south-east direction and putting car hire to transfer arriving.
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