Your child is going on a trip to a nature reserve organised by a local youth club. The club leader is looking for parents to travel with the group and you will like to go. Write a letter to the leader of the youth club. In your letter Say why you want to go on the trip Describe what you could do to help during the trip Ask for more details about the trip

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter in regard to the trip to a Nature Reserve that has been organised by your club.I would like to say that I am interested in joining

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group during travel with my child. Well, I am always ready to spend some time in nature and be with my kid who is

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going on

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trip.I can help you there in many ways .Especially, I will make sure all of the children are safe.

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, I can assist with providing food to them .

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, you can slot me in any other work

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needed. Could you please tell me more about

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trip?It would be very helpful if you can give me details

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as the duration of

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outing, the number of people going, location ,transportation and so on.I will be very thankful to you.I will wait for your response. If you have any questions or concerns

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please let me know. Yours Sincerely, Anmol Sharma

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

168 words

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