The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
Those bar charts depict
people
from
several ages and sex in Change preposition
of
music
listening. It is clear from the graph that many people
love
Pop and Rock
music
.
According to
what is shown people
in 45+ prefer
listen to classical Add the particle
toprefer
music
rather then
Pop and Replace the word
than
Rock
, but most of
Change preposition
apply
the
males and females Correct article usage
apply
Love
rock
music
with 25% for males and 15% for females respectively.
Moreover
, we can noticed
that not just 45+ Change the verb form
notice
people
love
classical music
because people
in the 25 to 30 has more than 15%. However
the females wear equal in both Add a comma
,However
of
Pop and Change preposition
apply
Rock
music
and it was the same in the 45+.
To sum up
, we could say that many people
love
Rock
music
until the 45+ ,but with
less than 10%.Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, it is clear that
a lot of people
in 16 to 24 heat
classical Correct your spelling
hear
music
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, music, love, rock with synonyms.
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